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I agree students should enjoy later school start times. I have three reasons, health, safety and stress.

My first point is health. It had been proven by scientists that it is at 7 o’clock in the morning that our body is producing melatomin, which is really important for our body because it controls our biological clock. Nowadays, students often go to bed late because of the home work and quizes. If students don’t get enough sleep at night, they might fell asleep in class and get ever worse poor/bad grades!

My second point is safety. Some students were injured by car accidents( –There are more than one hundred students getting injured in car accidents). Students who always get up late often don’t care about other cars (lose attention/focus) when they walk across the street.  It is a very dangerous. If students enjoy later school start times, these problems would be much less (solve/ reduce). Also, student can have more time to pack their bags, so they won’t leave some books behind and waste time( is it about safety?).

My last point is stress. Students, who don’t get enough sleep, will get(suffer from) more stress. It is not good for children and teenagers. Their sleep effects(affects) their height, too. Students will be shorter if they don’t sleep much.(about health?)

I have talked about health , safety and stress. For these reasons, I beg to oppose.



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