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Topic: Cheering for the team

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The World Baseball Classic was going to take place. Wang, Chen and Huang,  three baseball fans, wanted to cheer for Chinese Taipei. However, they lived in the school dormitory where there was no TV to watch the game live. In order to cheer for the team they support, they decided to go to Tianmu Baseball Field, where the game was going to take place/ be held be in. Their school was in Taichung, so they bought three HSR tickets and took HSR to Taipei  Main Train Station. However, when they arrived [at Taipei Main Train Station]–> there, they found out there were too many people who wanted to take the shuttle bus (有指定)buses to Tianmu Baseball Field. So they [had no choice but to]stand in line and waited for about 3 hours.

When they finally got on the bus, it was already 5 p.m., which was two hours after the game started[/ when the game had started for two hours]. They started to felt worried because the traffic was so terrible then, and that they might not be able to get to the field before the game ended. As a result, they decided to get down the bus at the Flower Expo Station, which is a station between the field and Taipei Main Station. They spent their whole night in the Exposition(for contemplation??). They thought of an idea: why don’t we be a volunteer in Taichung World Flora Exposition next year? Although they missed the baseball game, they were still happy and looking forward to the exposition next near.

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參考作文: (by Sandy)

The World Baseball Classic was going to take place. Wang, Chen and Huang, three baseball fans, wanted to cheer for Chinese Taipei. However, they lived in the school dormitory where there was no TV to watch the game live. In order to cheer for the team they support, they thought of an idea. They invited other roommates who were also interested in baseball to buy a new TV together.

As the game started, they were all excited and kept yelling with their hands raising in the air to cheer for every player. In the bottom of the ninth inning, Chinese Taipei was falling behind by 1 score. Wang, Chen and Huang were so nervous that they held their breath, staring at the TV concentratedly.

At this crucial moment, the TV screen suddenly shut down. All of them were stunned and confused. Chen tried to turn on the TV again but in vain. Fortunately, Wang and Huang majored in electronic engineering so they quickly fixed the problem. However, the game had ended when they finally turned on the TV. Chinese Taipei won, but they missed the most important scene. Without other choice, they could only wait for replays on TV. How pity they were!

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