[Mickey]0219 Taking a trip

 

作文題目 Taking a trip 

看圖寫故事,並寫出完整的結尾。
圖三是指到目的地後,人很多,地點隨意發想。

☆ 參考句型(至少用到下列兩項):
1. not only…but also…

2. 轉折詞(例如: however, moreover, therefore, in addition….  )
3. 關係代名詞(who, which都可以)
4. so… that…
5. too…to…
6.驚嘆句,如:What a beautiful day!/ How beautiful the day is!
7. Even though/ Even if 即使

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原文:

Last week, my family and I went to the Taipei Zoo.  We planned to go there for two days[or: we planned a two-day trip] and traveled by our van. [Unfortunately],There were a traffic jam on the highway. It took us three hours to go to the Taipei Zoo from Taichung.

When we arrived the Taipei Zoo, there were so many people that we had to wait for an hour to get in. We went in at 4 O’clock so we went out after half an hour. [To avoid the rush hours尖峰時刻/ popular times熱門時段]. [We set off early] the next day and we were the first family getting in the zoo and. We visited the Panda House, Penguin House and my favorite, amphibian and Reptile House. It was really fun!

This trip to the Taipei Zoo was really fun. However, it took us lots of time and money, but I still want to visit there again!

建議:
句子之間的連結可以更加強,如同我[]裡補充的
這次的漫畫主要是"traffic jam"和"crowded",應該加強這兩部分寫
有用到句型很棒,so… that…越來越會用了

參考用字

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