[Mickey]1204 Accident in the Restaurant

作業: 作文一篇+ 動詞片語(make up/ pick up/ point out)

題目: Accident in the Restaurant

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餐廳內客人絡繹不絕,此時發生了一件意外!請你根據圖片說故事,並為這個故事寫下完整的結局。請以「第一人稱」撰寫,假裝你是這名服務生。

★文章中請用到 too…to…(太…以至於不能…) 及 so… that(如此…以至於)的句型

單字補充:

  • rush (v.) 衝刺
  • chase after… (v.) 在…後面追著
  • accidentally (adj.) 意外地
  • splatter (v.) 灑出
  • stain (v.) 弄髒
  • scold (v.) 責罵
  • blame (v.) 責怪      用法: blame (某事的責任、過錯) on 人

原文:

There is a famous restaurant in the downtown. Their food is very delicious and you can admire the beautiful scenery of the streets. Many people eat in this restaurant every day.

One day, when the waitress was serving the hot soup, two children *run across(were chasing each other beside) her. [The waitress felt nervous and walked with caution but one of the children bumped into her suddenly.]The waitress accidentally slipped and dropped the soup on one of the customer’s head! The careless waitress said “Sorry" to the customer for many times, and the children’s parents scolded them not to play in the restaurant. The restaurant gave the customer a new shirt and a free meal.

Although there used to be an accident, this restaurant is still famous and popular. It is called “Mickey restaurant"!

(112 words)


評論:

**注意試著用"第一人稱",從waitress的角度撰寫。
注意使用過去式!!
但這篇文章的內容及架構蠻不錯的。
**沒用到指定的句型!


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