題目: My Ideal President
at least 110 words.
補充: personality vocabulary
open 開放的 e.g. The leader is open to suggestions. (這位領導者開放接受建議)
forward-thinking 有前瞻性的 (會思考未來)
have a vision 有遠見 (類似forward-thinking)
have a sense of responsibility 有責任感
keep learning 持續學習
This year, 2016, Tsai Ing-Wen was elected as the 14th president in Taiwan. Today, Donald Trump is elected as the 45th U.S.A president. The outcome of elections can’t satisfy everyone, but I have my ideal president who I look forward to showing up one day in the future. (補上去讓第一段與第二段ideal president的連接性更強)
I think a good president should be honest.
They He or s she should not be corrupt. A president who has a vision and a sense of responsibility can lead the country to become better/a prosperous future(to後面可以接動詞或名詞). They He or she should also be polite and humble, because a leader who always criticizes other people will not be popular*. What’s more, a president should create more welfare for the people; it is an important duty of a reliable president.
I can vote when I
grow up to /am/ turn 20 years old (或說at age 20). I will vote for a president candidate who is honest, decisive, forward-thinking , polite, humble and reliable.These are the peculiarities (*character traits人格特質) of a good leader.
這次的作文寫的不錯! 許多補充的單字都有用上，結構上也很乾淨、清楚。要注意主詞的單複數一致性，a president的代名詞就要用到he or she。
* the right to vote (n.)投票權 = suffrage (n.) 投票權
* ballot (n.) 選票
* presidential election 總統大選
* term (n.) 任期
e.g. The term of U.S. president is 4 years. The most a president can serve is two terms.
*candidate (n.) 候選人
支持: vote for、vote in favor of、 stand for/with、support
反對: vote against、stand against