[Mickey]11/13 My Ideal President

上課時間: 11/13(日)

題目: My Ideal President

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美國總統大選近在咫尺,你心目中的總統有甚麼樣的特質呢?
他/她應該要為社會做些什麼?
請說出你的想法
at least 110 words.

 

補充: personality vocabulary

honest 誠實的
open 開放的       e.g. The leader is open to suggestions. (這位領導者開放接受建議)
liberal 開明的
decisive 果斷的(會迅速做決策,不拖泥帶水)
forward-thinking 有前瞻性的 (會思考未來)
have a vision 有遠見 (類似forward-thinking)
passionate 有熱誠的
have a sense of responsibility 有責任感
sympathetic 有同情心的
generous 慷慨的
ambitious 有野心的
adventurous 愛冒險的
keep learning 持續學習
bold 大膽的
polite 有禮貌
humble 謙虛的
reliable 值得依靠的
creative 有創意的
patient 有耐心的


原文:

This year, 2016, Tsai Ing-Wen was elected as the 14th president in Taiwan. Today, Donald Trump is elected as the 45th U.S.A president. The outcome of elections can’t satisfy everyone, but I have my ideal president who I look forward to showing up one day in the future.  (補上去讓第一段與第二段ideal president的連接性更強)

I think a good president should be honest. They He or s she should not be corrupt. A president who has a vision and a sense of responsibility can lead the country to become better/a prosperous future(to後面可以接動詞或名詞). They He or she should  also be polite and humble, because a leader who always criticizes other people  will not be popular*. What’s more, a president should create more welfare for the people; it is an important duty of a reliable president.

I can vote when I grow up to /am/ turn 20 years old (或說at age 20).  I will vote for a president candidate who is honest, decisive, forward-thinking , polite, humble and reliable.These are the peculiarities (*character traits人格特質) of a good leader.

(122 words)


評論:

這次的作文寫的不錯! 許多補充的單字都有用上,結構上也很乾淨、清楚。要注意主詞的單複數一致性,a president的代名詞就要用到he or she。


單字補充:

* the right to vote (n.)投票權 = suffrage (n.) 投票權

* ballot (n.) 選票

* presidential election 總統大選

* term (n.) 任期
e.g. The term of U.S. president is 4 years. The most a president can serve is two terms.

*candidate (n.) 候選人

*投票的支持反對怎麼說呢?
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支持: vote for、vote in favor of、 stand for/with、support

反對: vote against、stand against

(參考來源:http://election.scholastic.com/election-central/vocabulary/ )

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