[Iris]0916四格漫畫

0916(五)早上10:00~12:00上課

題目:

四格漫畫

storytelling

原文:

Today is Howard’s birthday, and he has already think a good plan “I’ll sleep to ten o’clock, then watch TV to twelve o’clock. I will buy pizza and chip for lunch, then I can play video game to 12 pm. What a wonderful birthday! I’m so smart!" He did wait for his birthday for a long time, and this day finaly come. At first, every thing is good, but when he is watching his favorite show– Iris & Sandy magic time, his mom called, “Hey! Howard! Go take Mickey to the park. He is very board!" “Oh!Mom!"said Howard. “I want to watch this show! Look! Iris is dissappearing!" “JUST GGOOO!!!" Mom yelled. So Howard take Mickey to the park angryly. Sudently, he saw an ice cream shop, and it write “Try some for free!" “Oh, sir! I want some ice cream. This dog wants, too!""Dog, no. You, yes." The man said. So mickey eat happyly home, but dog is angry.

(160 words)


comment:

1. 副詞發生甚麼事!? happly → happily; suddently →  suddenly

2. 故事背景有鋪陳很好,但比例太多,第一張圖一直到中間段落才開始描述,壓縮到後面三張圖的空間

3. 時態為過去式,要特別注意。

 


題目講解

注意人物的情緒變化:男孩和狗

圖一

時間:On a beautiful weekend/ After the school assessment/ In the first day of summer vacation

男孩:relaxed, enjoy watching the entertainment TV show/ a movie

狗:bored, lazy, look down, no energy

圖二

男孩:Feel irritated, troublesome, annoyed, slam the door

媽媽:nag 嘮叨

狗:excited

圖三

男孩: impatient and walks fast, murmur, complain

狗:Dog is happy and wag its tail

 

圖四

男孩:lucky, happy, surprised, a blessing in disguise (塞翁失馬 焉知非福)

狗: gets happier because its keeper gets happy.

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