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2016/9/3 (六)上課

題目:

storytelling

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Tom had was watching TV for the whole morning with his dog lying on the carpet beside the door. At about eleven o’clock, because his mom was too busy preparing lunch for his family, she asked Tom to walk the dog for her. Tom turned off the TV unwillingly. However, his dog seemed to be happy and excited just when it saw Mom holding its leash. So, Tom went out with his dog with an unhappy face(→unhappily). On the way, Tom saw a new ice-cream stand giving customers free ice cream, so he went to try some. It  was so delicious that Tom suddenly soon felt rejoiced for he had listened to his mom and took his dog out for a walk.

● 第一句不需用到過去完成式,因為沒有要比較發生順序的動作,只是單純敘述過去發生的事。

● customer有拼錯,自己改正喔,上課時沒講到

● unwillingly= reluctantly 不情願的

●suddenly換成soon的原因: suddenly是突然,想想一秒變開心蠻怪的,應該是很快就開心了

●rejoice (v.) feel or show you are happy. 並非形容詞

●最後加上had listened to ,是與他吃冰淇淋覺得開心的時間點相比,好險他當時聽了媽媽的話


建議:

故事的情境可以自己想像,請參考:

圖一

時間:On a beautiful weekend/ After the school assessment/ In the first day of summer vacation

男孩:relaxed, enjoy watching the entertainment TV show/ a movie

狗:bored, lazy, look down, no energy

圖二

男孩:Feel irritated, troublesome, annoyed, slam the door

媽媽:nag 嘮叨

狗:excited

圖三

男孩: impatient and walks fast, murmur, complain

狗:Dog is happy and wag its tail

 

圖四

男孩:lucky, happy, surprised, a blessing in disguise (塞翁失馬 焉知非福)

狗: gets happier because its keeper gets happy.

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