A letter to a friend

Dear Eason,

I just heard that you failed  your second assessment. Don’t be upset, try again next semester.

If you want to get good grades on your assessments, here are some useful tips. First, when you are in school, you should be concentrated and listen to what teachers say. Next, you should review what you have learned in class after you go back home every day. Last but not least, after you finish your assessment, make sure you check your answers at least three times.

(介係詞用法)By following these tips, you can get good grades on your assessment next time!(/祈使句用法Follow these tips, and you will…)

Best wishes, Mickey.

(102 words)


評論:

從轉折語的使用看的出文章具有結構性,但也因此有種怕寫錯的感覺,每個原因都只有少少的描述,其實不用怕寫錯(老師才有功能阿~)把你心裡想說的用你會的英文表達出來,文法有錯或單字有錯也沒關係,上課檢討就好。重要是把你的創意力逼出來。

提醒: 轉折語在論說形式的文章(例如討論優缺點)比較常用,寫給朋友的信不須這麼嚴謹。

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